There are two types of dialogue: direct and indirect
Direct dialogue is speech using the character’s exact words. In this case, quotation marks are used.
Indirect dialogue is a second-hand report of something that was said or written but NOT the exact words in their original form.
When writing a narrative essay, you are telling a story. That story can become confusing for the reader, though, when dialogue is added, unless it’s very clear who is doing the talking. Knowing how to quote someone in an essay can help your reader more easily follow the flow and action of the story.
Let’s focus on the writing of direct dialogue by looking at some narrative essay example sentences.
There are some rules to follow when writing direct dialogue in your narratives:
Rule #1: Use quotation marks to indicate the words that are spoken by the characters.
Example: “Help me!” exclaimed the little girl.
Rule #2: Always begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes.
“I am coming home,” Sue announced. “I am really tired and can’t work anymore.”
“Okay, I think you should do that,” her husband agreed.
Rule #3: Make sure the reader knows who is doing the talking.
Rule #4: Use correct punctuation marks and capitalization.
“May I buy a new pair of shoes?” Lauren asked her mom.
Note that the quotation marks are outside the end punctuation of the quote; the rest of the sentence has its own end punctuation.
If the quote is not a question or exclamation, use a comma and not a period before the second quotation marks.
“I bought a new jacket yesterday,” Tammy said.
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By now, the rules of using quotation marks have probably been pounded into your head–use them when quoting a source or using dialogue, and know where to put your punctuation.
But don’t worry if they haven’t been pounded into your head. I’ll cover it later.
You may understand when to use quotation marks and even when to include quotes from outside sources, but what about dialogue?
That’s the one that always gets you, right?
You may not know the technical difference between quoting a source and using dialogue, or maybe you don’t know how to tell which to include in your essay, or how to properly incorporate dialogue into your essay.
Slow down. Take a breath. Just relax.
I’m here to answer these and other questions you may have about how to write dialogue in an essay. I’ll take you through the main what, when, why, how, and where of writing dialogue:
- What is dialogue?
- When is it appropriate to use dialogue in your essay?
- Why should you use dialogue?
- How to write dialogue in an essay
- Where can you get more information about using dialogue?
Dialogue: What It Is and What It Isn’t
In order for you to know how to write dialogue in an essay, you should know what exactly dialogue is first.
It’s really pretty simple. Dialogue is just a conversation between two or more people. It can be used in movies, plays, fiction or, in this case, essays. Dialogue should not be confused with quotations from outside sources.
Because quotation marks are used with both dialogue and quoting directly from sources, it’s important to know the difference between the two. Here are the main differences to help clear up any confusion you might have:
|Conversation between 2 or more people||Information from an outside source used word-for-word in your essay|
|Used as a hook or as part of a larger story||Used as a hook or to provide support for an argument|
A big point of confusion often comes from directly quoting dialogue. In this case, think about what you’re using that dialogue for–to demonstrate a point in your argument. Therefore, quoting dialogue would fall under the direct quote category.
Now that you know what dialogue is, it’s time to explore when to use it in your essay.
Knowing When to Use Dialogue in Your Essay and Why You Should Bother
As I mentioned before, dialogue is used all over the place, especially in movies, television, novels, and plays. For you and for the purposes of this advice, however, dialogue only really appears in one kind of essay–the narrative essay.
Why is this the case? It’s because other types of essays (i.e., argumentative and expository essays) aim to claim. In an argumentative essay, you are claiming that your point of view is the right one, and in an expository essay you are making a claim about how something works or explaining an idea.
Narrative essays, on the other hand, involve a more story-like nature. They tell readers of your past experiences. Many of those experiences include other people and the conversations you’ve had with them.
Using dialogue in argumentative and expository essays usually won’t add to your argument and may actually make it weaker. This is because your friends and family are probably not the best sources to get your support from–at least not for essays. Instead, it’s a better plan to directly quote or paraphrase from experts in the topic that your essay is about.
Using dialogue in narrative essays is a great technique. Dialogue helps move the story along, adds dimension to any characters you might have, and creates more interest for the reader.
Don’t believe me? Imagine reading a novel in which none of the characters spoke, or a movie in which none of the actors had a single line. Pretty boring, right? Well the same concept can apply to your narrative essay.
How to Write Dialogue in an Essay
Now that you understand when to use dialogue, we can get into the nitty-gritty of proper formatting. (That is, just in case your teacher hasn’t covered it, or if you need a little bit of a review.) The rules for writing dialogue in your essay break down into two main categories: proper use of quotation marks and where to put other punctuation.
Quotation Marks (U.S. rules)
There are three main rules about quotation marks you need to know. They’re listed below, followed by examples:
Rule 1: Use double quotation marks to indicate that a person is speaking in your writing.
Example: When I was young, my mother told me, “Follow your passion and the money will come.”
Rule 2: Use single quotation marks around a quote within a quote.
Example: “What did Benjamin Franklin mean when he said, ‘An investment in knowledge pays the best interest’?” Ms. Jackson asked.
Rule 3: If a person in your essay has more than a paragraph of dialogue, use the opening quotation marks at the beginning of each paragraph, but use closing quotation marks only at the end of the dialogue.
Example: Sarah nodded and said, “I think you’re right. We can’t get very far on this project if we can’t work together.
“But now there’s hardly any time left. Do you really think we can get it all done by Friday?”
There are only a few basic rules you need to know about where to put your punctuation when using dialogue.
Rule 1: If the quotation is at the end of a sentence, ALWAYS put your periods inside the quotation marks.
Ricky cried, “Lucy, you’ve got some ‘splaining to do”.
Doc explained, “The reason the time machine isn’t working is because the flux capacitor doesn’t have enough power.”
Rule 2: Put question marks and exclamation points inside the quotation marks only if they are part of what the person said.
The girl shouted, “Get that thing away from me”!
Billy was so ecstatic that he screamed, “I passed! I passed calculus!”
Rule 3: If the quote is part of a larger question or exclamation, put the punctuation after the quotation marks.
Did you hear Leo scream, “I’m king of the world?”
Did he just say, “The bird is the word”?
Rule 4: Use commas after said, asked, exclaimed or other similar verbs if they fall before the quote.
My brother said “I’m going to get you for this, sis.”
Mom always says, “Don’t play ball in the house.”
Rule 5: Place a comma inside the quotation marks if those verbs come after the quote.
“It’s getting dark. Come back inside” our mother called.
“Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes,” Mrs. Perkins said.
Rule 6: If a quoted sentence is broken up, put commas after the first part of the sentence, and after said, asked, exclaimed, etc.
“Yeah” she shrugged “I guess you’re right.”
“No,” she said, “I don’t have any plans tomorrow.”
Proper use of quotation marks and punctuation is not some random thing that you have to learn for no reason. These rules make your sentences easier to read and understand. Without them, your dialogue may turn into a headache for your reader, or for you when you go back and edit your writing.
Where to Find More Resources for How to Write Dialogue in an Essay
If you need some further clarification, you can use the links below for more examples and explanation on how to write dialogue in an essay.
Quotation Marks with Fiction, Poetry, and Titles – Purdue Owl
Talking Texts: Writing Dialogue in the College Composition Classroom
Writing Story Dialogue
How to Write Dialogue – Grammar Girl
Dialogue in Narrative Essays
In addition, the Kibin personal narrative essay examples can show you what dialogue looks like incorporated into a complete essay.
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